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Section Five Redundancy（第1页）

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Redundancyisverbal（文字中的）obesitybecauseredundantexpressionsaddnothingtowhathasalreadybeensaidienesestudents&#s，redundanainlyintwoforms.

1.Theitionofahrase

1）EmplitinglydifficulttofindpeoplewhosedEhext.

&ence1），findisanaeatedword.Youreplacethesedwithasynonym:

2）Emplitinglydifficulttohire（orrecruit）peoplewhosedEhext.

2.Theitionofanidea

1）MyfuturehopeisthatIgetacetotravelaroundtheworld.

&euresimplyrepeatsthemeanimodifies，sofutureisaneedlesswordandshouldbeeliminated:

2）MyhopeisthatIgetacetotravelaroundtheworld.

Ioavoidredundaandeicaldi.Repeatahraseoisneededforemphasisorclarity.

Practice2-5-1

&forredundaencebelow，youunnecessarywordorphraseandsubstitutebetterwordorphrase，orrewritetheeensrovidedonlyassuggestions.

1.Onlybegihoseerienetest.

2.Thereasonformyabseerdaywasbecauseofillness.

3.Thosewhofollowdiresarefewinnumber.

&hattheremarkabouthisreputationwetohisreputation.

5.ThereisoThompsontrustsandthatishiswife.

6.Atdaybreakthism，akenedbynoisescausedbysomethingdo>

7.Thisiinginstruowshowtomakeaieresting.

8.Ihadgotacold.So，assoonasIgothomeandgotywetdgotsomemedieoutofthecupboard（橱柜）.

9.Iofferedtheticketstothecerttothestudeurday.

10.Thedifferewoteachersisthattheyhavedifferentopinionsaboutthestudeeag.

Practice2-5-2

Thefollowiainingredundaedfromesestudents&#s.Toeditforredundaencebelow，youunnecessarywordorphraseandsubstitutebetterwordorphrase，orrewritetheeensrovided.

1.TherearemanyesepeoplewhoarestudyingEnglish.

2.People'swillforabetterlifewillneverend.

3.Nowadays，Englishisaionallanguageallovertheworld.

4.Peoplewhoaresuccessfulmustbediligentpeople.

5.pariballgameswithfootballgames，Ilikebasketballgames.

6.Ourteamandyourteamareextteams.

7.Moreandmoreeseowntheiro>

8.Moreandmestudentswhatuydon'tliveinthecollege.However，theyliveoffcampus.

9.Todealwithanger，youshouldfirstshutupyourmouth.

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11.Ifyoulikedeliciousfoods，youtastedifferentkindsofdeliciousfyourtravel.

12.Wheodifficulty，wewillgiveyouahandtohelpyouoverethedifficulty.