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Ifyonanysortoftroversialtopic，yaessay.Aessayisoemptstoceyourreaderthatyouropinioandeyourreader'smindaboutaparticularissue.Thetwomodelessaysbelowdiscussthesamesubject:capitalpu.Whilereadingthem，youseehowthewriters'opinionsdifferfromeachother.

ModelEssayOne

ArgumentsagainstCapitalPu

Capitalpu，ordeathpenalty，hasbeehebeginningofhumauhisturythenumberofpeopleexecutedhasbeendeg.Inthe1930s，1，667peoplewereexeparedto717inthe1950s.Since1977，only47peoplehavebeehoughamajorityofAmerisadvocatekeepihpenalty，itshouldnotbeappliedanyloisethiacceptable，sopradfinanbearable.

&reasonwhyweshouldabolishcapitalpuhatitisethiacceptable.“Thoushaltnotkill”

isthefifthent（戒律）thatwasgiventousbyGod.Anindividualhasnhttokill，anotherpersonhasdone.OnlyGoddGodshouldbetheoroy.

Thesedreasonweshouldalpuhatithasfailedinitspurpose.Manysupportersofthedeathpenaltyarguethatitisastroopeoplewhocouldbeals.Theyusethetheorythatapersoheamouobegainedfromkillithepainofthepuhepuisgreatenough，theyreason，thepersonwillnotitthecrime.However，thisisafalseargumepeoplewhoesarenotratioime.AstudybyDr.GrisbyoftheUyofFloridashoeralesahahefemaleswhoittedviolentcrimeswereuheinfluenceofalcsandnotratioime.

Thefinalreasonweshoulddoawayuhatitorethaepeoplethinkitischeapertoexecuteaalthanitistosupplyhimorherwithroom，gandfood，buttheyarewrohpenaltyisaveryexpeisistingofthelong，drawn-outprocessofjurysele，exterials，maintenance（生活费用）ofprisohropealsprocess.ItcosttheStateofUtahnearlyamilliondollarstoexecuteGaryGilmore.

Tosumup，capitalpuisbyhebestmethodtodealersonwhohasurder.Sialpuhasnotfunedasected，itshouldbebannedasquicklyaspossible.Wewillfindsoonthatwewouldbebetteroffwithoutthisihanwithit.Meanwhile，morereasonablelawsshouldbeexploredasalteropeheals.

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A“Yes”

forCapitalPu

Capitalpuispubydeath，anditisusuallygiventothuiltyofthemostviolentcrimes.However，sialpuhasbeenusedlessfrequentlyiedStatesifewdelyfewvicted（被定罪的）murderershavebeeed.Asace，therehasbeenaterribleinretyears.Thisprovesthatcapitalpushouldbeusedmoreofteredues，showourdeterminationtofightagainstinjustidprotetpeople.

Somepeuethatcapitalpudoeshisisnottrue.Maseriouscrimesbecausetheyknowthatthelawwillnotbeeoheyknowthattheygetagoodlawyertodefeheyplead（以……为由进行辩护）insanity，ortheyfeeltheygetoutofjailearlyeitheronprobatioodbehavior.Ifcapitalpucouldbeenforcedmoreoften，peoplewouldknowthatiftheywerefoundguiltyofseriouscrimessuchasmurder，theywouldbeseh.Althoughthisiswaytotrolallcrimes，itisahodtoeofthemostseriousones.

Othersclaimthatcapitalpuisimmoral，buttheyshouldknowthatmurderandrapearealsoimmoral.Thelawotbetotallymoralwhenalsarenotmoral.AsWalterBernswroteinForCapitalPu:dtheMoralityoftheDeathPenalty，“Therealissueiswhetherjusticepermitsorevehedeathpenalty.Iamawarethatitisaterriblepuhereareterribledterribleals.”

Wesimplyotallowalstotakeadvahelaw，butistanduptothemsternly.

&argumentagainstcapitalpuhatitistooexpeheUesspendsmillionsofdollarsonalltypesramsthatdonotalwaysbespeople，sowhyshoulditnotspendmoneycapitalpuisapoteoiohavemurderersandrapistsis.Ifurdererswereexecuted，theywoulddefibeabletokillagain.Thisistheleastthatetoproteot.TheStatesshouldrealizethesigalpua.

In，capitalpuisaerrenttocrime.Ifwedohelifeofthosewhomurdertheirfellowmen，thegeneralpublicwillgetthemessagethatoursocietycareslittleabouthumanlife.Ioensureeveryone'ssafety，pleasevote“yes”

forcapitalpu.

'sreadtwumentessayswrittenbytwodifferesoopicbelow.

InNorthAmerieassedthatelimihepulsesothatolderpeoplewishingtouewmaydoso.Doyouthinkashouldalsoadoptasimilarpolicy?

ModelEssayOne

A“Yes”

forpulsoryRetirementPolicy

&trieshavediffereretirememostemployeesarerequiredtoretirewhentheyarereagaage.InNorthAmerica，however，aneassedthatelimihepulsesothatanybodywhowishestouewmaydoso.AlthoughthislawmaybeagoodohAmeris，similarlegislationshouldnotbeimplementedinsiderationoflimitedjobopportunities，youngpeople'sdevelopment，andtheforthehealthofoldpeople.

&reasonashouldnotadoptsuchalaulsepolicyhelpstolowertheue.ahasaboutover1.3billioisextremelyhardfoveroprovideeveryermajob.Ifoldpeopledohepeoplemaywahestreets，resultiialsoseeday.

Thesedreasonashouldsuchalaeopleotadvaheircareersifoldpeoplefillthejobsatthetop.Althoughsomeoldpeoplehaverigexperiehekheyhavemaynotsuitthefastdevelopmey.Maeisfiedwithwhattheyhaveachieved，anddonotwanttohavearast，mostyoungpeertogainnewknowledgeandwillingtoapplytheirkheirwork.Ifoldpepeoplewillhavemoreportaheirpostsaertributionstoourtry.

Thefitoenforcesuchalawinaisthatoldpeopleareusuallyih.Opposmayclaimthatsomeoldpeoplearestillewehavetoadmitthenaturalrole；thatis，oldpeopleareicastheyusedtobe，ortheyareigpeopleare.Sotheirworkeffiberatherloweveiowork.Sinceoldpeoplehaveworkedfordecades，theyshouldstaheirretirementlife.Forexample，theytravel，playchess，writeautobiography，etc..Theyalsohelptolrand.Ahappyfamilyeopletolivelonger.

Inbrief，ifallesepeopleretireatthepulse，people，aireeswillbeherornoteedstogethepresentpulsoryretiremeirelyoicularsituationinourowntry.

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ArgumentsagainstpulsoryRetirementPolicy

Generallyspeaking，thoseemployeesroagfiftyyearsoldorovertendtothinkabouttheirretirementalthoughthisisapainfulexperieneofthem.ThegoodhatanewlawinNorthAmericamaybepassedthatelimihepulsesothatolderpeoplewishingtouewmaydoso.Althoughtheideatoeliminatepulsewillnotbewellreceivedbysomeese，especiallyyoungpeople，weshouldalsoadoptasimilarlawbeployeeshaverichworkexperienprodudhelptocreateamorepetitivejobmarket.

Somepeopleinsistthatyouadvaheircareersifoldpeoplefillthejobsatthetop.Theirideaisquiteuaherewillbeagreatlossifallpeopleobeythepulsepolicy.Ourtryisshortofoutstandingprofessors，seniineers，andallkies.Manyoldpeopleareprecioustaleheyhavealotofworkexperieforcedtoretire，theirwisdomwillhelptreaterwealthfora.Atryotaffordtolenumberofexperiencedpeoplewhostillservetheirtry.

uethatoldpeoplearephysicallyweak.Eveniftheyareabletouetowork，theydonothavehighworkefficy.Thisopinionisoutofdatealready.Iy，alotofequipmentistrolledbyputers，sopeopleplishtheirtasksbytheouse.Asaresult，workefficyisbasedonpeople'sfiherthanonmassmanuallabors.Sinceoldpeoplealsousetheirfiheworkeffiotbenecessarilyaffected.

Finally，oppohinkthatyoubeabletoworktotheirfullcapacityifoldpeoplestilloccupythepositions.Buttheyshouldalsoknowthatmanyyoungpeopleonlywanttomakemoremoheydon'twanttoworkhard.Oheyfiheywillmakeacareerge.Howtheyworktotheirfullcapacityiftheygetheirjobsfrequently?Inanyoldemployeesstickwiththeirjobsformorethanthirtyyears.Theydothejobsthatmanyyouwanttodo.Ifoldemployeesuetowork，theywillcreateamorepetitivesituationinthejobmarket.Whenyoungpeoplehavediffidingjobs，theywillcherishthejobstheyd.

Tosummarize，ifpeoplewastheywaswillouthedrawbaaisopesideworld.Ifweegoodideasfromabroadaopractice，futurerosperousa.Thus，asimilarlawshouldalsobemadeinourtry.